Hehehe, I think it's very funny how your flash, TinCetic's flash, and my Blob Warfare flash all have the same style and all use blobs fighting each other. (I DID NOT COPY TINCETIC). I'm assuming you didn't copy mine either since not many people watched my flash anyway -.- . Alright so keeping the style thing off to the side, your animation needs a little bit of work. I'm not saying it was bad, it was actually great improvement from your first episode. I just recommend making it smoother in future episodes (a higher fps, for instance). The voice acting was not bad at all, surprisingly. It was a nice change from those blocky text bubbles from the first episodes.
So overall, awesome job man. You have made so much improvement from your other episode and I expect some front-page quality flash from you in the future :). Good luck!
PS. Don't acuse me of stealing your flash style/idea, I submitted it earlier :P. Hmm.... did you.... nah nevermind.
PPS to TinCetic. Just because he and I may have bland looking limbless footless blobs that doesn't mean the idea was copied. If it makes you THAT mad, then improve the damn blobs in your movies for cyring out loud and prove to us that you're better :P.
Not too shabby...
The music and graphics were excellent, but the only thing that needed work was the animation. Make sure you don't overuse tweens; also make sure that the tweens don't move too much, too fast, and too far. It just takes a lot of practice, I'm sure you'll improve very quickly; you have a lot of talent :).
Not too bad...
This was actually a very nice animation considering it was frame by frame most of the time. I can see you put a lot of work into it and i suggest keep it up for your other submissions. Oh and by the way, "Pencilmation" ripped off "Paper Wars" which was one of my favorite flahes. If "Pencilmation" made it on the top 50 then i suggest this shouldnt be critisised for entirely copying a flash idea. Overall, excellent for a first submission, you have possible potential for a front page flash ;).
Keep up the good work with these they're a lot of fun!
Score: 2962 (AAA) At 1.5 Speed
It was challenging but hey, if you could make one yet even harder, that'd be awesome ;).
That was great!
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That was one of the best flashes I've seen in a while... feels great to let out that anger hidden within all of us. I hope you make more!
Animation was good but generally... it sucked... probably cuz i aint black...
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